20/09/2021
The Beach
WALT: writing a Narrative that’s amazing.
On a nice sunny day me and my friends Max jake hurry we were hanging out at the Beach for a nap on our bed and was dag up in the sand for a long time to make a pit for a hol
When we were sleeping on our bed the tide was coming in and we were washing away from the beach on our plow up bed. Out at sea from a long distance me and max jake and hurry was in the middle of the sea for ages there was a big boat coming pest but he did not see as coming the waves were masivs we flipped over
Max jake hurry
They walked off the Beach Exhausted and they are coming bake next weekend.
Self assessment
Today I improved my writing by .
I improved My amagination
I like the uboat me going out to sea
To improve I need to
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