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Friday, September 25, 2020

My Speech - Pets should be treated as well as humans

 WALT present a persuasive speech.

What did you do well?

I did planing and did a 2 minute speesh. I did alitobit of I contact I was standing in frant of the class. saing my speesh I was so xsitid to say my speesh . I mist on to das I was stil prad of my salf I was prakdising on my speesh for agis I am stil prad of my salf.

what do I need to work on for next time

I need to prakdis more and do more I contak and look at the oldeints when I tolk and I spek up and tolk ladr.

2 comments:

  1. Hi my name is Jed from your tui mai tui atu class,next time check your spelling and next time probably make writing a little bit smaller.

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  2. hi Zion my name is Troy im from you buddy class your writingis very goodfor a year 4 you seem like a nice person. i think you spelling is ok enjoy the rest of the rest of your day. 0/

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